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Contents 1 Presentation Feedback - 8th October 2010 1.1 Concrete slides 1.2 Logo slide 1.3 Animation slides 1.4 Industrial process slide 1.5 Ethic and safety slides 1.6 MazF slides 1.7 Swarming slides 1.8 Subtilin slides 1.9 Calcium carbonate slides 1.10 Filamentous slides 1.11 YneA slides 1.12 Workflow 1.13 e-Science 1.14 Summary slides 1.15 Apply to all slides

Presentation Feedback - 8th October 2010

The feedback given after presenting to Anil Wipat's group:

Concrete slides

• Should talk slower
• Remove the slide that have the crack with the lady
• Compact the concrete slides
• More pictures
• Say we did concrete experiment like cracking
• Have a picture with us in hard hats and our team t-shirt in the concrete lab
• Have a slide that says why is concrete bad
• Change the man's carbon footprint wording
• Remove the pie chart away, if not redraw it with the words bigger and explain it slowly

Logo slide

• Put text on top of logo

Animation slides

• Increase the text size
• Make the contrast for the cracks better
• Cells in the purple to show glue, filamentous and calcium carbonate

Industrial process slide

• To have picture on teh side of the words

Ethic and safety slides

• Say wild type is an autotroph that cannot convert trytophan, therefore it will die in the wild

MazF slides

• Have to explain the toxin if you are talking about it
• Try to cut down on it.
• Say we would have to test the kill switch

Swarming slides

• Have to describle swarming
• Picture to be bigger
• Cut down on words
• Need modelling picture and describle how to did it and with what software and equation

Subtilin slides

• Change the diagram or redraw
• Change the p_veg promoter to Pveg promoter

Calcium carbonate slides

• Show the pathway and where it interacts
• Flux balance analysis

Filamentous slides

• Explain what ftsZ ring is about
• Change the white text
• Remove '!'

YneA slides

• Text to be bigger
• Remove the vector and starch testing pictures
• Words to be bigger
• Remove the word extremely
• Need numbers

Workflow

• Make sure the animation is working

e-Science

• Name the logo
• Remove pegusus
• Synthetic spelled wrongly
• Cannnot use BioBrick it
• Remove the promoter and sequence pictures

Summary slides

• Less busy

Apply to all slides

• Text to be bigger
• No full stop
• No '!'
• Change the green background