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Presentation Feedback - 8th October 2010
The feedback given after presenting to Anil Wipat's group:
Concrete slides
- Should talk slower
- Remove the slide that have the crack with the lady
- Compact the concrete slides
- More pictures
- Say we did concrete experiment like cracking
- Have a picture with us in hard hats and our team t-shirt in the concrete lab
- Have a slide that says why is concrete bad
- Change the man's carbon footprint wording
- Remove the pie chart away, if not redraw it with the words bigger and explain it slowly
Logo slide
- Put text on top of logo
Animation slides
- Increase the text size
- Make the contrast for the cracks better
- Cells in the purple to show glue, filamentous and calcium carbonate
Industrial process slide
- To have picture on teh side of the words
Ethic and safety slides
- Say wild type is an autotroph that cannot convert trytophan, therefore it will die in the wild
MazF slides
- Have to explain the toxin if you are talking about it
- Try to cut down on it.
- Say we would have to test the kill switch
Swarming slides
- Have to describle swarming
- Picture to be bigger
- Cut down on words
- Need modelling picture and describle how to did it and with what software and equation
Subtilin slides
- Change the diagram or redraw
- Change the p_veg promoter to Pveg promoter
Calcium carbonate slides
- Show the pathway and where it interacts
- Flux balance analysis
Filamentous slides
- Explain what ftsZ ring is about
- Change the white text
- Remove '!'
YneA slides
- Text to be bigger
- Remove the vector and starch testing pictures
- Words to be bigger
- Remove the word extremely
- Need numbers
Workflow
- Make sure the animation is working
e-science
- Name the logo
- Remove pegusus
- Synthetic spelled wrongly
- Cannnot use BioBrick it
- Remove the promoter and sequence pictures
Summary slides
- Less busy
Apply to all slides
- Text to be bigger
- No full stop
- No '!'
- Change the green background