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=Presentation feedback=
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==Presentation Feedback - 8th October 2010==
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The feedback given after presenting to Anil Wipat's group:
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==Concrete slides==
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====Concrete slides====
* Should talk slower
* Should talk slower
* Remove the slide that have the crack with the lady
* Remove the slide that have the crack with the lady
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* Remove the pie chart away, if not redraw it with the words bigger and explain it slowly
* Remove the pie chart away, if not redraw it with the words bigger and explain it slowly
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==Logo slide==
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====Logo slide====
* Put text on top of logo
* Put text on top of logo
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==Animation slides==
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====Animation slides====
* Increase the text size
* Increase the text size
* Make the contrast for the cracks better
* Make the contrast for the cracks better
* Cells in the purple to show glue, filamentous and calcium carbonate
* Cells in the purple to show glue, filamentous and calcium carbonate
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==Industrial process slide==
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====Industrial process slide====
* To have picture on teh side of the words
* To have picture on teh side of the words
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== Ethic and safety slides==
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==== Ethic and safety slides====
* Say wild type is an autotroph that cannot convert trytophan, therefore it will die in the wild
* Say wild type is an autotroph that cannot convert trytophan, therefore it will die in the wild
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==MazF slides==
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====MazF slides====
* Have to explain the toxin if you are talking about it
* Have to explain the toxin if you are talking about it
* Try to cut down on it.
* Try to cut down on it.
* Say we would have to test the kill switch  
* Say we would have to test the kill switch  
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==Swarming slides==
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====Swarming slides====
* Have to describle swarming
* Have to describle swarming
* Picture to be bigger
* Picture to be bigger
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* Need modelling picture and describle how to did it and with what software and equation
* Need modelling picture and describle how to did it and with what software and equation
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==Subtilin slides==
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====Subtilin slides====
* Change the diagram or redraw
* Change the diagram or redraw
* Change the p_veg promoter to Pveg promoter
* Change the p_veg promoter to Pveg promoter
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==Calcium carbonate slides==
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====Calcium carbonate slides====
* Show the pathway and where it interacts
* Show the pathway and where it interacts
* Flux balance analysis
* Flux balance analysis
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==Filamentous slides==
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====Filamentous slides====
* Explain what ftsZ ring is about
* Explain what ftsZ ring is about
* Change the white text
* Change the white text
* Remove '!'
* Remove '!'
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==YneA slides==
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====YneA slides====
* Text to be bigger
* Text to be bigger
* Remove the vector and starch testing pictures
* Remove the vector and starch testing pictures
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* Need numbers
* Need numbers
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==Workflow==
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====Workflow====
* Make sure the animation is working
* Make sure the animation is working
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==e-science==
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====e-Science====
* Name the logo
* Name the logo
* Remove pegusus
* Remove pegusus
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* Remove the promoter and sequence pictures
* Remove the promoter and sequence pictures
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==Summary slides==
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====Summary slides====
* Less busy
* Less busy
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==Apply to all slides==
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====Apply to all slides====
* Text to be bigger
* Text to be bigger
* No full stop
* No full stop
* No '!'
* No '!'
* Change the green background
* Change the green background

Latest revision as of 17:00, 25 October 2010

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Contents

Presentation Feedback - 8th October 2010

The feedback given after presenting to Anil Wipat's group:

Concrete slides

  • Should talk slower
  • Remove the slide that have the crack with the lady
  • Compact the concrete slides
  • More pictures
  • Say we did concrete experiment like cracking
  • Have a picture with us in hard hats and our team t-shirt in the concrete lab
  • Have a slide that says why is concrete bad
  • Change the man's carbon footprint wording
  • Remove the pie chart away, if not redraw it with the words bigger and explain it slowly

Logo slide

  • Put text on top of logo

Animation slides

  • Increase the text size
  • Make the contrast for the cracks better
  • Cells in the purple to show glue, filamentous and calcium carbonate

Industrial process slide

  • To have picture on teh side of the words

Ethic and safety slides

  • Say wild type is an autotroph that cannot convert trytophan, therefore it will die in the wild

MazF slides

  • Have to explain the toxin if you are talking about it
  • Try to cut down on it.
  • Say we would have to test the kill switch

Swarming slides

  • Have to describle swarming
  • Picture to be bigger
  • Cut down on words
  • Need modelling picture and describle how to did it and with what software and equation

Subtilin slides

  • Change the diagram or redraw
  • Change the p_veg promoter to Pveg promoter

Calcium carbonate slides

  • Show the pathway and where it interacts
  • Flux balance analysis

Filamentous slides

  • Explain what ftsZ ring is about
  • Change the white text
  • Remove '!'

YneA slides

  • Text to be bigger
  • Remove the vector and starch testing pictures
  • Words to be bigger
  • Remove the word extremely
  • Need numbers

Workflow

  • Make sure the animation is working

e-Science

  • Name the logo
  • Remove pegusus
  • Synthetic spelled wrongly
  • Cannnot use BioBrick it
  • Remove the promoter and sequence pictures

Summary slides

  • Less busy

Apply to all slides

  • Text to be bigger
  • No full stop
  • No '!'
  • Change the green background