Team:ETHZ Basel/Internal

From 2010.igem.org

Revision as of 20:46, 25 October 2010 by Georgerosenberger (Talk | contribs)

Internal

This section will be removed before wiki-freeze!

DO NOT EDIT NOW!!!

General remarks

  • Protein names: normally written
  • gene names: italic
  • Directed movement NOT running, please correct!
  • chemotaxis pathway NOT Chemotaxis nor chemotactic
  • E. lemming with space
    • E. lemming vs THE E. lemming: E. lemming: Project name (whole assay), The E. lemming: One single genetically modified E. coli
  • far-red light, not far red light, please correct!
  • internal links - we should refer to other internal pages (hyperlinks) where appropriate, inside the paragraphs.
  • in silico & in vivo, not in-silico & in-vivo

Teaser & Animations

Responsibilities

Suggestions

first paragraph, define 'anchor' and 'tumbling' and 'directed movement' before using the terms
second paragraph: quite unclear, if possible, add more details & explain more
add a few sentences (and link them) regarding ARL & Safety

50 μm (?) high flow channel; remove question mark

in second part of the page, 'cells with highest score'; define the score
clearly define the reference used: [1] Stuurman et al. 2007; could not uniquely identify it

Original sentence 'It should be noticed that this signal changes with time constant in the range of hours' rephrased to:'It should be noticed that this signal constantly changes with time in the range of hours.' Revert if meaning changed.

added reference [2]. would be good if a biologist can check if it's the right one. Looks like the page ends abruptly. something like a conclusion perhaps?

spacing, subheadings & some bullet points); suggesting more images for the user experience part

Corrected minor spelling mistakes. Gave names to the 2 steps of the cell detection algorithm. Added subheadings to make it more readable & structured. Revert if necessary.

check with biology to keep it updated (check list)

Add link to Biozentrum Unibas.

Christoph will do this by Sunday

Christoph:

  • first box: E. lemming, these aren't the devices we used for modeling, that is what we model, anchor not necessarily the plasmid
  • too many "in order to"
  • mathematical modeling overview: please rearrange: 1. WHAT complex model set up, consisting of chemotaxis, light, move, implemented and coupled 2. WHY explain support a little bit more
  • Model implementation: tab and text order should be equal; implementation and adaption of literature described ones, movement by our own!

C: give an idea about the complexity, e.g. high number of proteins and interactions; why did we use only Spiro and Mello?; models: text first as it explains the plots; please gibe a clearer description of the plots, for an external person it's almost not understandable

Retrieved from "http://2010.igem.org/Team:ETHZ_Basel/Internal"